Hello Mike,
Thank you for your wonderful website. I think your Maestro sounds like the circuitry I see. If I were to change something to improve the sound I would reduce the two 100pf capacitors to a 47pf or smaller. One secret in theremin design is the two oscillators should not know the other one exists. Sort of like tall fences make for good neighbors.
Observing your sound in Audacity the signal is overdriven which clips the bottom of the audio wave peak and to much pulling or fighting between the oscillators on the low end. Enjoy
PS: My Harmonic Exciter boards could make this have the sound of Clara. Then you would have to call it Maestra, not Maestro.
Christopher