Just done a quick frequency response analysis on your modification vs the original EM circuit - above 100kHz your circuit poses far greater attenuation to the signal than the EM - I get a gain of about 10m for your circuit and about 21m for the original EM..
Reduce your C2 to 10n and it will stand a much better chance of working I think.
(or perhaps even better - increase C1 to 470pF.. C1@1n with C2@47n gives exactly the same frequency response as the original EM.. But dont forget that +/- 10% is likely for capacitor values - and this is where the original EM design scores - because the attenuation is determined by the resistors which have much higher tolerance, and variations of the coupling capacitor (C3 on the VFO) make little difference - this capacitor can be any value 5n to 20n, so 10n +/- 20% is no problem)
Fred.